I’ve climbed Mt. Everest; I got into the Harvard law school last year; I walked Che Guevara’s route through Argentina, Chile and, Peru; I met the Queen of England and got to shake her hand; I have been through childbirth; I know what it is like to be content; I know what it is like to read Shakespeare and understand; I have been in love for years; I ski every winter in the Alps; I have resuscitated a man; I have given to the Humane Society; I have walked with a llama in the Grand Canyon; I have photographed Niagra Falls; I have seen the destruction in Jerusalem’s markets; I have witnessed a miracle.
I have watched my own flesh and blood grow from a single cell; I have buried my father; I have prayed to God; I know what it means to be poor; I know what it means to be rich without money; I have seen the African bushmen; I have quoted Hemingway correctly; I have mastered English; I can “get around” in a foreign country; I have stayed in hostels; I have experienced wine from a vineyard in France (particularly Cabernet Sauvignon); I gave my shoes in the Holocaust; I starved during the potato famine; I knew the Czar Katherine; I have repented my sins.
I came from Germany; I came from Poland; I came from the Ukraine; I came from Ireland; I can speak Russian; I can drink whiskey; I can drink vinegar when there is nothing else; I can throw a left hook like you wouldn’t believe; I can go without food for 3 weeks; I can go without water for 3 days; I can go without air for 3 minutes; I am human; I am American; I am socialist; I am conservative; I vote; I can make up my mind; I can make the Volcan sign; I can recite Beethoven’s 5th on the piano; I can run a mile in 6 minutes; I can do anything I want.
I can see the future.
Powerful! This is your application essay for law school? It will certainly grab the attention of reviewers. I was expecting a summative explanation of sorts (Like, did you experience some of these things? Are these all things you have read and thus experienced? I know you are an avid reader). I really like that you are using repetition of structure to mediate the very amazing and detailed experiences you describe. So fun to read!
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